Twinkling Starz

What does it mean, anyway?

Sorry, I forgot I wasn't logged on.

I understood it a bit, but I don't see how the title fits with it, and the whole thing is a little too descriptive.

This is very sad. Very powerful, though. Wonderful work. -*Twinkles

Very nice. In the first four stanzas, you use 'the' too many times. Well done. -*Twinkles

Good work. The last line is nice, like Madhatter said. This was very interesting.

I do not like the last line. I am not sure what this poem means, but the last line kinda ruined it. The rest of the poem is quite well ...

I like this it is very simple and just touching on things. Your writing style is very good, and the imagery/metaphors you use are wonderful. You are a talented writer. ...

Em, it's a good start, but we need a bit more. Also, houselves cannot quit, they must be given clothing from their owners.

Very whimsical and happy. I really love it. Wonderful work. The imagery is fabulous and I really like the last stanza, it really wrapped it up. -*Twinkles

I must say, you are a great writer. You make the reader think... This is a wonderful poem. Keep writing. ;)

Very nice, great imagery.

I don't know, but it's cute. Good work.

Very simple, I really like it. Well done. ;)

Yep.